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Jarring (a poem)

A thing that I made for Sophia Network's Poetry Month ...



                JARRING

                ...that the excellency of the power may be of God, and not of us.

                She was always giving him lip
                these days; she used
                to hold her peace, at least, he mused.

                He was the pain in her neck that would
                not lift; she’d left
                too much too long too unsaid.

                She had been a thing he could handle –
                once; her new stance
                was in spite of the manual.

                He would shoulder her over, at
                ev’ry turn; God
                forbid he be less than above her.

                She came with a body for flaunting;
                she taunted him,
                wanting him endlessly wanting.

                He still tried to pull the old ‘foot down’
                routine; as if
                that decided all things, or should.

                They were nearing breaking point when
                it was given;
                they held it/it held them together.

                And the seams glowed, like treasure.
             
                Carolyn Whitnall, 2015.



Written in tandem with this trio on 'patriarchy', having (in particular) Genesis 31 Peter 3 and 2 Corinthians 4 in mind.

For those kind but poetry-unenthused near-and-dear who want to be nice but feel, in relation to the above, like the parent of a toddler who has just been presented with an eager but indeterminate drawing (is it a cat? those could be ears ... or sails ... perhaps it's ... a boat?): does this (much as it loathes me to spell it out) help?


[Image is public domain from Wikimedia Commons].

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